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The Comedown

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The Comedown

Post by Lopo' on Wed Jun 01, 2011 6:03 pm

First tag in weeks!
Really like how it turned.

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V2


V2 B&W


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Re: The Comedown

Post by ShadowCause on Wed Jun 01, 2011 6:08 pm

Render is very LQ. The tag is way too bright, and very mono

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Re: The Comedown

Post by Raxby on Wed Jun 01, 2011 6:13 pm

Overblurred, monotone and boring compo (rule of thirds). Effects do look pretty cool and blending seems alright.

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Re: The Comedown

Post by Lopo' on Wed Jun 01, 2011 6:32 pm

**Updated**
Added more colors, burn and improved lighting.
Added a B&W version.

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Re: The Comedown

Post by ShadowCause on Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:00 pm

Still looks LQ

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Re: The Comedown

Post by ghostCatalyst on Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:02 pm

The semi-blurring kinda kills the focal point, especially cuz its the whole thing, not just one part.

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Re: The Comedown

Post by Raxby on Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:09 pm

Still too blurred dude. The blur is honestly killing this tag. You can fix colours and compo and lightning all you want, with that much blur it won't look good anyway. :\

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Re: The Comedown

Post by Lopo' on Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:34 pm

Fixed, what else can i work on with this one?

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Re: The Comedown

Post by Clone on Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:35 pm

Major improvement with version 3.
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Re: The Comedown

Post by Iridescent[FX] on Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:09 pm

B&W V3 is the best, IMO.

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Re: The Comedown

Post by Raxby on Thu Jun 02, 2011 4:53 am

Still a bit blurred, but I guess that's just beyond helping at this point. Compo could've been better (rule of thirds) but that's really hard to fix now as well. v3 BW one is alright.

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